Other than that, the story was great but you could have made each sex scene as the end of a chapter.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-04 11:25:05it is illegal to put ads in your story that is spam you can and should be arrested for that delete the spam now«1234» It’s like you kicked the story in the balls. Porn videos 19 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 16:51:17ruined by posting a stolen story and putting an ad in the middle of itanonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 08:30:57you are some kinky fucker but wow am i turnd onanonymous readerReport 2012-08-23 13:50:48DELETE THE STOLEN STORY BEFORE YOU ARE ARRESTED FOR FELONY PLAGERISM.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-22 18:33:26This would have been perfect, exept for the fucking ad interupting the action. 19 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 16:51:17ruined by posting a stolen story and putting an ad in the middle of itanonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 08:30:57you are some kinky fucker but wow am i turnd onanonymous readerReport 2012-08-23 13:50:48DELETE THE STOLEN STORY BEFORE YOU ARE ARRESTED FOR FELONY PLAGERISM.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-22 18:33:26This would have been perfect, exept for the fucking ad interupting the action.
