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The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. But I did finish it. Good job over all!«1» 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. I just didn’t get sucked in. But I did finish it. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. Good job over all!«1»
