1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-14 22:32:29This story is a little too rushed. Keep writing.«1» I have read other stories that you have written on this site, but this one seems too rushed. I have read other stories that you have written on this site, but this one seems too rushed. Keep writing.«1» 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-14 22:32:29This story is a little too rushed. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-14 22:32:29This story is a little too rushed. I have read other stories that you have written on this site, but this one seems too rushed. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-14 22:32:29This story is a little too rushed. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-14 22:32:29This story is a little too rushed. I have read other stories that you have written on this site, but this one seems too rushed. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-05-14 22:32:29This story is a little too rushed. Keep writing.«1» Keep writing.«1» I have read other stories that you have written on this site, but this one seems too rushed.
