14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-02 18:20:28ever heard of paragraphs and punctuation??? OH GOD HE USED HIS DICK AS A WAND. In this order;
… … keep it up,improve ur punctuation and u will be great;)Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-22 10:03:15It took me a while but I got there in the end. In this order;
… … … OH GOD PENIS WANDS ARE A THING.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-13 01:59:44No point in posting this but i must say huge block of wordanonymous readerReport 2011-09-22 01:46:10read the rest of the mother fucking story your bound to change your viewanonymous readerReport 2011-08-03 22:31:31wtfh you could have had paragraphs
and too much back story more pornsex sex stuff
and pah lease i read it on a fan fic a looooooong time ago«123» 14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-02 18:20:28ever heard of paragraphs and punctuation???
