Also, and I know this is a personal pet peeve of mine; be a good writer, not a statistician. r«1» r«1» r«1» IGNORE THE ‘OLDFUCKER’. BeePorn I’m waiting for more, maybe some p.s.a. i gv u a 10. Send a few over here.READERReport 2005-09-06 10:36:25Good premise, good structure, a little too formulaic. Its a good basic story but you have the ability to make it better, keep trying.READERReport 2005-09-06 10:10:54Hot story, loved the lead-in, the action, and accoplishment. Tell us she is tall and thin with firm heavy breasts, and the she has the legs of a runner. Where are these hot twats. Don’t just throw a bunch of numbers (bra, height, wieght, dick length), describe stuff. Don’t just throw a bunch of numbers (bra, height, wieght, dick length), describe stuff. Don’t just throw a bunch of numbers (bra, height, wieght, dick length), describe stuff.
