‘Thought’ should read ‘Throat’. Free Porn . . … Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. though it is a good storie(juded by how well its written, not by content)anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 17:57:48Quite a different type of story…but good. though it is a good storie(juded by how well its written, not by content)anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 17:57:48Quite a different type of story…but good. Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» Will make for easier reading.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 22:16:11a note on Qaddafi: some poeple in Iraq did that after a public exicution I believe… though it is a good storie(juded by how well its written, not by content)anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 17:57:48Quite a different type of story…but good. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant
