There was just one problem that i saw, In the 6th paragraph, it says “Sarah was forced to move back”, shouldn’t it be Claudia?READERReport 2008-02-20 23:08:12yay! i liked it a lot, and you should write a sequel. Maybe have Claudia come back, and you guys do it for real? I thought it was very good :DREADERReport 2008-02-20 06:06:54it was good, if a little shortREADERReport 2008-02-19 22:13:09thanks!«12» i liked it a lot, and you should write a sequel. And i’m sorry it ends kinda quick, i didn’t rly know where to go next!READERReport 2008-02-20 16:32:24What fucking idiots rate well written stories like this below crap rush jobs that Fbailey churns out?! I thought it was very good :DREADERReport 2008-02-20 06:06:54it was good, if a little shortREADERReport 2008-02-19 22:13:09thanks!«12» I thought it was very good :DREADERReport 2008-02-20 06:06:54it was good, if a little shortREADERReport 2008-02-19 22:13:09thanks!«12»
