Pt.2 plzREADERReport 2007-05-31 07:57:03I thought it was awesome. BeePorn Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» Thanks heaps! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-14 00:09:16I really liked your story!!! its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt. Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1» 8/10READERReport 2006-07-22 01:30:23What find of fucking bullshit is this ?READERReport 2006-07-16 23:04:20Her language was just fine, u must not have very much exp.or you’d know how women talk when they’re getting laid. I doubt very many middle aged women frequently use cunt and cum-slut in this context. you probably need a little more experience both sexually and as a writer before you try to write a story in a female voice. its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt. its true about the way women talk when theyre gettin fucked but seriously that was a great attempt. Thanks heaps! Nah, rework the language a little and try again.«1»
