2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 01:31:23If this has been edited I am certainly happy that I did not try to read the previous version. You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 01:31:23If this has been edited I am certainly happy that I did not try to read the previous version. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you.
