Keep up the good work.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:00:15Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Keep up the good work.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:00:15Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. Keep up the good work.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:00:15Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. she definately has no self respect and should be horse whipped then thrown in the pig pen for fodder for the pigsanonymous readerReport 2011-10-27 05:11:08Artilces like this make life so much simpler.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:16:48Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction. Still a few spelling and grammar errors, but nothing excessive or that I felt really detracted from the story. Keep up the good work.freethinkerReport 2009-10-03 02:00:15Very good, pleasant, and a nice first attempt at fiction.
