9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-12-04 04:27:32THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NO PARAGRAPHS!!! BeePorn 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-12-04 04:27:32THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NO PARAGRAPHS!!! Quit switching back and forth between present and past tense.«12» im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-12-04 04:27:32THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NO PARAGRAPHS!!! GAVE NEGATIVE RATING DUE TO LACK OS PARAGRAPHS!!! GAVE NEGATIVE RATING DUE TO LACK OS PARAGRAPHS!!! im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. TOO HARD TO READ!! im 14 and if yes comment “Yes to sex with the 14″and ill give u my phone number. …angiesloverReport 2012-11-30 21:55:43keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lteranonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 14:46:07Good story. GAVE NEGATIVE RATING DUE TO LACK OS PARAGRAPHS!!! Quit switching back and forth between present and past tense.«12» I WILL NOT READ A STORY WITHOUT PARAGRAPHS!!!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-12-03 00:23:07hey,,,,u want some more dick?
