However, it’s your story and you can do as you please with it. Better proof reading would greatly enhance this story. Read some books so that you can see just how a story should be written. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. Better proof reading would greatly enhance this story. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-13 07:17:21Good grief. Before you post a story, really look at it. First, it’s spelled ‘grammar’. I am a “Redneck” and that doesn’t require you to be stupid, your poor attempt at trying to write “Redneck dialogue” was absolutely horrible, why it made me pucker up tighter’n a bulls ass at fly time!!
