Try reading some Steven King for pace.Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-04 20:32:44I gave you a negative rating because she had a shaved pussy. Women need to stop shaving their pubes. It’s not were, it’s we’re for we are, Mom peeked around the door, not peaked, the story is full of such mistakes and they make it hard to read. Try reading some Steven King for pace.Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-04 20:32:44I gave you a negative rating because she had a shaved pussy. The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is good, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. Don’t stop writing, the stories are good, but please learn to use the correct words and punctuation.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-17 12:28:18A nice story,but you effed up by adding 10 inches of d gave a negative vote.«12345» You keep using Your instead of You’re, cars don’t have breaks unless they’re broken, they have brakes, start each sentence with a capital, use punctuation for goodness sake! It had a lot of potential but poor grammar and inarticulation made it boring and difficult to read.
