15 comments«123»byronnnnReport 2017-11-17 08:25:13It’s the “terribly redundant writing style that makes your writing fabulous.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-22 06:13:15I’m sorry, but you have a horribly redundant writing style, we don’t need to read hid full name 100 times. Also, needs better description and try not to use coloquial terms, ie: catsup should be ketchup.Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-10 19:56:09this was very very very terrible, one of the worst ive ever readAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 17:15:27this was terribleREADERReport 2008-02-04 23:13:44who eats catsup these days?!!!«123» Also, needs better description and try not to use coloquial terms, ie: catsup should be ketchup.Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-10 19:56:09this was very very very terrible, one of the worst ive ever readAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 17:15:27this was terribleREADERReport 2008-02-04 23:13:44who eats catsup these days?!!!«123» Also, needs better description and try not to use coloquial terms, ie: catsup should be ketchup.Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-10 19:56:09this was very very very terrible, one of the worst ive ever readAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 17:15:27this was terribleREADERReport 2008-02-04 23:13:44who eats catsup these days?!!!«123»
