Think your stories over a bit first, write it, then read and edit it, then re-read and re-edit it, if you want to write a good story look at other things but the obvious as well . Porn videos Could have used a bit more description of the physical appearances of the two, but the actual sex was good.READERReport 2004-08-04 13:30:14I loved it! Don’t forget to learn from others and their mistakes either, to be a great writer you should read alot, it helps when you are building sentenses. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2007-07-04 16:24:5510/10READERReport 2005-12-26 00:19:28That’s a pretty solid story. This story suck, but then again most stories on this site is about one fifth the quality of the stories I usually read so maybe you shouldn’t take it as something negative…
