Short paragraphs with a double space between them really makes a story much easier to read. It appears that you have promise. It appears that you have promise. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. Thanks for the entertainment.«1» Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. Thanks for the entertainment.«1» donb is right about easier reading. lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. Thanks for the entertainment.«1» Lainiedonb9033Report 2010-03-23 00:29:36Sweetie, it’s a very, very hot story, but you should check out some other stories on this site to look at format.
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