3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. Most of the time you guessed wrong. Such poor writing makes your story unenjoyable reading.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-11 02:05:09I liked it very much. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work.
