Also try and make paragraphs makes it easier to read.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-21 04:18:40its spelled which not witch.«12» You also have not finished the story which is a big letdown, what happens to the main characters? But You have jumbled everything into one or two paragraphs which makes for a boring read. BeePorn Please give us the rest of the story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 20:20:45it was a good story and it wasnt like the most other storys where the only thing what happens is sex its like the nam says a love story and i liked it very muchanonymous readerReport 2012-11-01 03:31:17damn, another butthead that cannot write a storyanonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 00:14:36You is wonderful, keep writing. Please give us the rest of the story.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 20:20:45it was a good story and it wasnt like the most other storys where the only thing what happens is sex its like the nam says a love story and i liked it very muchanonymous readerReport 2012-11-01 03:31:17damn, another butthead that cannot write a storyanonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 00:14:36You is wonderful, keep writing.
