Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» Most of the time you guessed wrong. Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. Most of the time you guessed wrong. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. ‘Its tits WHERE tightly…and THE tied…’, ‘…before the house went QUITE.’,
‘It felt hands on IT body…’, ‘Dinner is SERVICED…’, ‘…before BRING it to…’, etc, etc. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e. Most of these errors could be corrected by proof-reading by a literate person BEFORE submitting your work. Such poor writing makes your story unenjoyable reading.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-11 02:05:09I liked it very much. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing.
