Which was done well right in the beginning when you described your charecter in the closet. BeePorn On a different note, however, You set this story up fairly decently. I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. Which was done well right in the beginning when you described your charecter in the closet. I’m not saying give us the whole world Layout, but give some description of body structure, back ground, scene etc… I’m not saying give us the whole world Layout, but give some description of body structure, back ground, scene etc… I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. When I read, whether it’s a book, short story, fan fiction, etc… Which was done well right in the beginning when you described your charecter in the closet. I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. There’s a reason your story has the rating it does…
