Frankly, I didn’t read your story all that closely, chiefly due to the god-awful spacing – it’s hard to read a wall-o-text. You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. Don’t let opinions dissuade you from writing whatever, and however, the inspiration strikes you. My own experience is that I don’t fall in love until the third time with sex.dwduckReport 2009-11-21 10:52:43Thank you. I apologize for shooting my keyboard off without knowing what I was typing about. My own experience is that I don’t fall in love until the third time with sex.dwduckReport 2009-11-21 10:52:43Thank you. 23 comments«12345»Wildfire1180Report 2020-06-13 04:58:37That was a great story!!Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-03 12:57:21Loved it can’t wait for part twoAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-30 07:19:55I would have preferred a more positive response to the gift he was given, mind you it was probably more realistic this way. I re-read the story, and did find where the jock thinks to himself that he’s falling for this girl. You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. I’d like to be perfectly honest and say that, it upset me that the comment left by the other reader was mostly complaining about
