You are describing the action well and are keeping the troops aware of the body build, so what else really counts. COACHAnonymous readerReport 2014-12-29 13:34:59Your stories are are great,but You should ease off the fucking a little bit for davey….Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-21 20:59:02kind of heavy on sex give him some rest or he will die before the story
is finished .«1234» 19 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-05-05 01:42:36Pick the cherry path of ParadiseAnonymous readerReport 2016-02-20 20:41:44Sarah’s my favorite 🙂 ; still wish I was in Davids place
Ben BittenAnonymous readerReport 2015-11-19 22:50:52I think you have a good balance between sex and narrative. Since I first read you, the language and grammar are greatly improved. After all, your readers are here to get either wet or hard, and filling that need is your first job. After all, your readers are here to get either wet or hard, and filling that need is your first job.
