C’ mon get real. Also some lengthier and more detailed descriptions of the sexual activity would have improved the story and made it more erotic.«12» Not only were there spelling mistakes and grammar errors, the story lacked substance. Not only were there spelling mistakes and grammar errors, the story lacked substance. At least try not to have the whole story a load of bs.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 16:08:33I can’t believe the previous comments that is was a good story. At least try not to have the whole story a load of bs.anonymous readerReport 2010-12-19 16:08:33I can’t believe the previous comments that is was a good story. C’ mon get real. Also some lengthier and more detailed descriptions of the sexual activity would have improved the story and made it more erotic.«12»
