Hope you revert to your supposed type going forward . Almost seemed inevitable; apparently Jen had been bragging about his skills to Tiff who needed a sample. Has it just evolved into fiction and every mans fantasy , I think so but I’ll read on but its disappointing a little, to go from 1 lifelong partner and sensetive man you portray to someone more or less juggling 3 women, not such a lovely man ( in my opinion) . In a way I’m disappointed because it does take away from the original position that Jen and Jeff are headed for an exclusive relationship. I think it’s too early to get a very close friend involved in the mixAnonymous readerReport 2014-07-30 14:52:43As i read this i cameAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-25 15:25:01I do like the action but your character development is skewed, if he doesn’t like even talking about their sex life and gets embarrassed by it how can he go twice from shy one woman man to showing no embarrassment and fingering them and eating them out , you have got to progress not backtrack and contradict his character its not real
