one whole sentence is tough to read. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-28 02:53:42you need to learn spelling and punctuation, and use SPELL CHECKAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-16 06:40:46story said and done hell with english and puctuationREADERReport 2007-05-02 01:03:36Took one look at the huge paragraph and didn”t even bother to read itREADERReport 2007-05-01 11:52:35Take all suggestion from below and edit it, then re-submit youe story……READERReport 2007-05-01 09:21:39story line ok, break it up some and learn spelling. try again.«123» try again.«123» try again.«123» 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-28 02:53:42you need to learn spelling and punctuation, and use SPELL CHECKAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-16 06:40:46story said and done hell with english and puctuationREADERReport 2007-05-02 01:03:36Took one look at the huge paragraph and didn”t even bother to read itREADERReport 2007-05-01 11:52:35Take all suggestion from below and edit it, then re-submit youe story……READERReport 2007-05-01 09:21:39story line ok, break it up some and learn spelling. try again.«123» 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-28 02:53:42you need to learn spelling and punctuation, and use SPELL CHECKAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-16 06:40:46story said and done hell with english and puctuationREADERReport 2007-05-02 01:03:36Took one look at the huge paragraph and didn”t even bother to read itREADERReport 2007-05-01 11:52:35Take all suggestion from below and edit it, then re-submit youe story……READERReport 2007-05-01 09:21:39story line ok,
