[psssst… I look forward to more. that’s a good chap, now, run along and I shan’t make note of the one imperfection. [psssst… could you fix the ‘p’ to an ‘m’ in “kissed hip gently”. [psssst… that’s a good chap, now, run along and I shan’t make note of the one imperfection. ^_^anonymous readerReport 2011-03-30 22:26:53AMAZING!!! I look forward to more. Don’t know how that bugger slipped in there. :-)]anonymous readerReport 2011-03-28 23:04:11you copyrighted it, really
nice story though«12» [psssst… 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-09-17 11:24:37really great story, more chapters please.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-31 08:51:49AMAZING!!! Excellent job! could you fix the ‘p’ to an ‘m’ in “kissed hip gently”. Don’t know how that bugger slipped in there. could you fix the ‘p’ to an ‘m’ in “kissed hip gently”. I haven’t read a story like this in a long time, and I would be more than happy to read another chapter and more!
