And to the dick complaining about grammer learn how to spell before you try correcting someon else. got to fix the names though. Keep writing more. keep the hot stories coming.READERReport 2005-06-15 00:30:34Unity
JKB sdfu«123» 11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-25 10:02:19I loved it. Keep writing more. Keep writing more. keep the hot stories coming.READERReport 2005-06-15 00:30:34Unity
JKB sdfu«123» got to fix the names though. 11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-25 10:02:19I loved it. Keep writing more. got to fix the names though. got to fix the names though. 11 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-25 10:02:19I loved it. keep the hot stories coming.READERReport 2005-06-15 00:30:34Unity
JKB sdfu«123» Keep writing more. Fun story, but, as most people have already said, you keep mixing up the names.READERReport 2006-06-12 19:54:52zis story is verrry gooooood bat ur grammer suks asss
chrachtttttttteeeerrs arrrrrrrreeeeeee messsssssseed upppREADERReport 2005-09-13 12:33:11love your stories. got to fix the names though. keep the hot stories coming.READERReport 2005-06-15 00:30:34Unity
JKB sdfu«123» Keep writing more. Fun story, but, as most people have already said, you keep mixing up the names.READERReport 2006-06-12 19:54:52zis story is verrry gooooood bat ur grammer suks asss
chrachtttttttteeeerrs arrrrrrrreeeeeee messsssssseed upppREADERReport 2005-09-13 12:33:11love your stories.
