52 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-03 00:04:55poor writing poor editing and no end all add up to a waste of time.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-25 16:21:36needs a good editing and the writer needs to learn where the hymen is. Which is odd, cause some parts were written so expertly, with wonderful word choice, and in other part John was “stairing” at his friends. BeePorn Very vidid and well written.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-02 15:38:28I’m a girl and I was already squirting my pussy juices after a few minutes of reading it«12345» I chalk it up typo, but check for them next time. Awesome job otherwise. I chalk it up typo, but check for them next time. Which is odd, cause some parts were written so expertly, with wonderful word choice, and in other part John was “stairing” at his friends. 52 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-03 00:04:55poor writing poor editing and no end all add up to a waste of time.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-25 16:21:36needs a good editing and the writer needs to learn where the hymen is.
