5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-27 05:59:25Continueanonymous readerReport 2012-01-03 00:59:04Keep going as it is. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-27 05:59:25Continueanonymous readerReport 2012-01-03 00:59:04Keep going as it is. 9/10snowleopard3200Report 2012-01-01 16:39:53Potential, it has potential in a third part. Work on flushing out more details and some parts of the spelling.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-01 08:59:26Are you actually eight years old or do you just write like a second grader?anonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 19:43:13BY ALL MEANS WRITE ANOTHER PART THIS PART WAS OK
;; JJ«1» please!! 9/10snowleopard3200Report 2012-01-01 16:39:53Potential, it has potential in a third part. please!! 9/10snowleopard3200Report 2012-01-01 16:39:53Potential, it has potential in a third part. 9/10snowleopard3200Report 2012-01-01 16:39:53Potential, it has potential in a third part. 9/10snowleopard3200Report 2012-01-01 16:39:53Potential, it has potential in a third part. please!! please!! Work on flushing out more details and some parts of the spelling.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-01 08:59:26Are you actually eight years old or do you just write like a second grader?anonymous readerReport 2011-12-31 19:43:13BY ALL MEANS WRITE ANOTHER PART THIS PART WAS OK
;; JJ«1» 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-27 05:59:25Continueanonymous readerReport 2012-01-03 00:59:04Keep going as it is.
