Cum on, the kid already brought lubrication? also..whose kyle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-22 07:11:34Fake fake fake. also..whose kyle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-22 07:11:34Fake fake fake. U need to put more detailAnonymous readerReport 2009-01-14 21:06:20There is no god damn pop in a guy! Cum on, the kid already brought lubrication? Thanks for enough imaginative input to get me hard though! 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-03 10:39:03Poor story with no plot or characterisationmtnguy70Report 2011-02-17 02:20:23Nice story, but too many commas, and they weren’t usually in the correct places. The people before me expressed my other thoughts. Work on that and other technical details, and you’ll do well. Cum on, the kid already brought lubrication? U missed the plot. Thanks for enough imaginative input to get me hard though! :)Anonymous readerReport 2009-07-13 22:35:08you got a good base for a story, now u just need more detail and for it to be much longer! :)Anonymous readerReport 2009-07-13 22:35:08you got a good base for a story, now u just need more detail and for it to be much longer! Actually have sex before you write a story!«12» U missed the plot.
