nd if it is not that is bad….try to be originalanonymous readerReport 2011-04-29 20:52:18NICE STORY…i will give you 9/10…nice build up and hope you have your second part coming soon…«1» I don’t like plagiarism – be different if you gave credit, but you didn’t! 5 comments«1»818caReport 2011-05-05 15:21:49Good story. 2/10
Fix’mFix’mReport 2011-04-29 23:05:47Hardly original as I have seen several very similar stMR.koolReport 2011-04-29 20:53:57Hmmm….nice story…nice build up…descriptive….but i have read this before…it is like Jackies anal or something….if it is yours amazing job…. 2/10
Fix’mFix’mReport 2011-04-29 23:05:47Hardly original as I have seen several very similar stMR.koolReport 2011-04-29 20:53:57Hmmm….nice story…nice build up…descriptive….but i have read this before…it is like Jackies anal or something….if it is yours amazing job…. I don’t like plagiarism – be different if you gave credit, but you didn’t! I don’t like plagiarism – be different if you gave credit, but you didn’t! 5 comments«1»818caReport 2011-05-05 15:21:49Good story. 2/10
Fix’mFix’mReport 2011-04-29 23:05:47Hardly original as I have seen several very similar stMR.koolReport 2011-04-29 20:53:57Hmmm….nice story…nice build up…descriptive….but i have read this before…it is like Jackies anal or something….if it is yours amazing job….
