2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-17 18:38:23btilliantAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-30 08:37:16While your action moves a bit too fast, I enjoyed the story very much. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-17 18:38:23btilliantAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-30 08:37:16While your action moves a bit too fast, I enjoyed the story very much. Over all a good story but the plot needs work.«1» I think the bit with the daughter went too fast also. I think the bit with the daughter went too fast also. It made it seem they conspired to get the daughter involved. Over all a good story but the plot needs work.«1» I think the bit with the daughter went too fast also. It made it seem they conspired to get the daughter involved. Over all a good story but the plot needs work.«1» I think the bit with the daughter went too fast also. Also Mom gave in too quickly.
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