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Good Luck. Take time to proofread your story. Good luck.anonymous readerReport 2011-02-19 12:31:57Great start, good pacing and interesting characters. First, proofread your work several times. You don’t have to be an English Expert, but you should show some respect for your readers. How does it sound to you? Take time to proofread your story. You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. It makes the story much easier and enjoyable to read. I got so tired of translating what you said, into what you must have meant, that I lost interest in the story.senorlongoReport 2011-03-04 23:40:28I have several stories on this site and I’m glad to pass along some of what I have learned from experience.
