yet from time to time review Ur earlier efforts for encouraging comments such as this. BeePorn Keep them coming.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-27 05:37:00Nice plot..you are getting better Darklord«1» Hopefully U have progressed beyond amatur. Hopefully U have progressed beyond amatur. 4 comments«1»Rex AllenReport 2024-04-26 04:18:53I loved the entire story. Overall I enjoyed them very much!! Keep them coming.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-27 05:37:00Nice plot..you are getting better Darklord«1» Maybe a little anti-climatic. Overall I enjoyed them very much!! The closing was not what I expected but still good. Good luck in future efforts,
Thank U for sharing Ur talent with us..OGEYReport 2010-09-01 09:48:24Great Stories, some spelling and Punctuation.. I have started to re-read some stories again, getting more detail.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-18 09:24:48Agree with the 2 comments. The closing was not what I expected but still good. .(Whatever that means?)
Since this was posted 7 yrs ago, I feel my comments are mute; doubtfully U can learn anything from them, except that yrs later U can see that in Ur early efforts, U showed promise.
