could of took off the last part and edited this a little and it would of been awsomeAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-14 05:38:41Well you screwed the fuck up in the last one but this made up 4 it hugely. Nice twist with her having dreamed it. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-28 18:47:45Good chapter but you screwed up big timeceburesReport 2012-07-20 12:23:55it is better. good work bouncing backAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-17 18:32:23Very good. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-28 18:47:45Good chapter but you screwed up big timeceburesReport 2012-07-20 12:23:55it is better. good work bouncing backAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-17 18:32:23Very good. Nice twist with her having dreamed it. could of took off the last part and edited this a little and it would of been awsomeAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-14 05:38:41Well you screwed the fuck up in the last one but this made up 4 it hugely. could of took off the last part and edited this a little and it would of been awsomeAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-14 05:38:41Well you screwed the fuck up in the last one but this made up 4 it hugely. Nice twist with her having dreamed it.
