Incredibly descriptive and fluid writing that simply kept me wanting to read more and more. Incredibly descriptive and fluid writing that simply kept me wanting to read more and more. BeePorn Keep up the good work, you certainly have made a fan out of me.wickedkittenReport 2010-07-05 03:19:59I really don’t understand why anyone would not enjoy this story, if people are looking for a story, this is a story, if they are looking for a sex scene, there is plenty in there, and if they think actually reading a good story for the writing and the eroticism is hard, they shouldn’t complain for their own hindrances. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-23 09:46:11I fail to understand why the rating of the story is so low. Keep up the good work, you certainly have made a fan out of me.wickedkittenReport 2010-07-05 03:19:59I really don’t understand why anyone would not enjoy this story, if people are looking for a story, this is a story, if they are looking for a sex scene, there is plenty in there, and if they think actually reading a good story for the writing and the eroticism is hard, they shouldn’t complain
