Other than that, a job well done, and I’m looking forward to more chapters. BeePorn Other than that, a job well done, and I’m looking forward to more chapters. There were some spelling errors but nothing that really took away from the story.Only thing is try and format it better so that it’s easier to read. i just though it might be abit interesting if that happened but either way love your story«12» Write more if you would pleaseAnonymous readerReport 2014-09-25 04:33:50good storyanonymous readerReport 2012-04-03 14:19:05Can’t wait for the next chapter. I do agree though that it would be interesting if Axel somehow ends up being a werewolf.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-02 21:31:45I have to agree with the rest of the comments here.
