Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school. Free Porn …or…are you still in school?? You write like a half retarded twelve year old.. If you write again which I don’t suggest. Before the first sentence the story had potential.. How the hell did u even GET an account – thru ur daddy? Wow, if your dad is fine with you having sex with Luke while you’re 14, then that’s incredibly wrong.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-30 01:26:34Ok.. Before the first sentence the story had potential.. If you write again which I don’t suggest. Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! Before the first sentence the story had potential.. Before the first sentence the story had potential.. Please don’t continue«12» Give it up. …u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just. …stop writing. …OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??!
