And yes I realize my spelling/grammar is bad. And yes I realize my spelling/grammar is bad. Porn IF you want to save this series DELETE it and get a GOOD WRITER to rewrite it and have THEM repost it you suck at writing.Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-07 23:19:17Yeah I agree that the spelling errors made this tough to read but the content was OK. . …A bit rushed though. . …Made me cum though. …6 out of 10. . . …makrovReport 2010-06-09 19:12:28Yes you need to proof read and spell check but I thought that all in all the story was good. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-12-07 19:42:21best thing you can do is DELETE everything and stop writing forever. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-12-07 19:42:21best thing you can do is DELETE everything and stop writing forever.
