4/10READERReport 2007-11-26 19:22:05Very sexy, please continue. Jemma.READERReport 2007-07-14 17:55:38Everything that happend turned me on but it was too fast paced. BeePorn 9 comments«12»xxwednesdayxxxReport 2009-04-28 15:03:41hmm… this was real short and fast. …didnt really do anything too sexual. This story goes nowhere, and wasn’t even sexy. needs to be longer and have more detail. 9 comments«12»xxwednesdayxxxReport 2009-04-28 15:03:41hmm… I think it should be longer next time.READERReport 2007-02-25 23:40:59Biggest waste of time I’ve ever spent. This story goes nowhere, and wasn’t even sexy. 9 comments«12»xxwednesdayxxxReport 2009-04-28 15:03:41hmm… needs to be longer and have more detail. Jemma.READERReport 2007-07-14 17:55:38Everything that happend turned me on but it was too fast paced. I shouldn’t exist.READERReport 2007-02-25 14:15:55More natier chapters.«12» This story goes nowhere, and wasn’t even sexy. this was real short and fast. …didnt really do anything too sexual.
