I would highly recommend that you continue writing but PLEASE find an editor program to assist you in the future.«123» so even if u do call the cops they can’t do a thing.plus if u are so against this kind of stuff why did u read it? Free Porn It has already been pointed out that your story flow is to fast and you do not take the time to develop your segment scenes. That makes you a dumbshit in my book. i simply wrote a story from my past to let go of it. 14 comments«123»greencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:40i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read of wat happen nextgreencarnage13Report 2011-01-19 03:44:28i loved ur story but wat happen who opened the door n came in n did ya get caught i want 2 read of wat happen nextpuddintain55Report 2010-07-20 05:58:35To the reader on 7-13-2010 that said who said you were going to report this story to the POLICE you couldn’t even spell police right.
