simplistic storyline, terrible grammar.«12» seriously dont write anymore… i want some action in there.READERReport 2005-09-02 18:50:19poor. Porn i want back the time i spent reading that garbage but i will never get it unfortunately. This confused me, is it a bit like Gor? But if she’s a virgin she would have a white collar.. you suck at it. … The virgins are marked by a white collar.READERReport 2008-01-19 22:12:09i love this storyREADERReport 2005-11-08 13:15:23more please. It sounds so. The virgins are marked by a white collar.READERReport 2008-01-19 22:12:09i love this storyREADERReport 2005-11-08 13:15:23more please. you suck at it. … This confused me, is it a bit like Gor? But if she’s a virgin she would have a white collar.. speaking from a literary perspective the wrighting is schoolboy standard. speaking from a literary perspective the wrighting is schoolboy standard. i want back the time i spent reading that garbage but i will never get it unfortunately. speaking from a literary perspective the wrighting is schoolboy standard. Even if not Gor-related. This confused me, is it a bit like Gor? It sounds so. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-23 12:27:02rubbish… But if she’s a virgin she would have a white
