Horrid writing – simply horrid. No flow, no growth of characters, no descriptive passages of time, nothing. Porn was the writer obama?? WSCLGanonymous readerReport 2013-05-01 04:02:40Plz wright more want to no ehst hsppened nextanonymous readerReport 2013-05-01 02:44:01Normally i never criticize BUIT I actually believe i am now stupider and much more mindless after reading this story. Horrid writing – simply horrid. I have my doubts that you are 24 or a woman. Where the ???? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-05-19 14:30:20The basis for the story is there but the writing is not. I have my doubts that you are 24 or a woman. What the ???? Horrid writing – simply horrid. Not sure why I actually read this. Even worse are the spelling and grammar mistakes.
