It could be a great story. It could be a great story. BeePorn I only comment about spelling and grammer, if it brings the story down. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong word. Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong word. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong word.
