HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. Porn You did a wonderful job of handling the dialogue, which is something that a lot of writers have problems with. Nice storyAnonymous readerReport 2012-10-31 00:09:37Hello Stranger92 (This is the second part to my comment)
You did a great job of dividing your story into correct paragraphs, which makes it a lot easier to read. I have read other stories here, written by people that was supposed to know the English language, and some of them were worse and harder to read than yours. Your story was very well thought out. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it.
