3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together. Not worth the time too read it.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together. Not worth the time too read it.«1» Not worth the time too read it.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 04:10:04Where is Chapter #1 Could not find itanonymous readerReport 2013-04-28 03:33:58Not bad if it’s your first story, writing could use some depth, and where is the first chapter?anonymous readerReport 2013-04-27 12:48:51Very poor content and everything run together.
