IGNORE THE ‘OLDFUCKER’. Where are these hot twats. Where are these hot twats. Don’t just throw a bunch of numbers (bra, height, wieght, dick length), describe stuff. Its a good basic story but you have the ability to make it better, keep trying.READERReport 2005-09-06 10:10:54Hot story, loved the lead-in, the action, and accoplishment. Send a few over here.READERReport 2005-09-06 10:36:25Good premise, good structure, a little too formulaic. Tell us she is tall and thin with firm heavy breasts, and the she has the legs of a runner. Also, and I know this is a personal pet peeve of mine; be a good writer, not a statistician. Where are these hot twats. Also, and I know this is a personal pet peeve of mine; be a good writer, not a statistician. IGNORE THE ‘OLDFUCKER’. Send a few over here.READERReport 2005-09-06 10:36:25Good premise, good structure, a little too formulaic. I’m waiting for more, maybe some p.s.a. HE PROBABLY HAS NO LIFE?READERReport 2005-09-06 11:31:28What a slut. Where are these hot twats. Tell us she is tall and thin with firm heavy breasts, and the she has the legs of a runner.
