Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes? Usually such traits start exhibiting such behavior in their 20’s unless there has been an abusive father or other authoritian figure guiding such behavior verbally or physically. 9 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-21 10:42:49want to comment on the abusive treatment of Anna & CJ but not sure what to say. That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. I think you need to proof read, missing words, misspelled words, ect..anonymous readerReport 2012-09-27 12:10:21god, i’d love for you to add another male character. I realize that some women may be “turned” toward receiving abusive treatment but the characterization of these two sisters seem to indicate otherwise, especially at such a young age. adding another male would make it so fucking hot. Still a great story line & getting better with each chapter.Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-26 16:07:19Who is Mercedes? That fact is why it’s so difficult to comment. Usually such traits start exhibiting such behavior in their 20’s unless there has been an abusive father or other authoritian figure guiding such behavior verbally or physically.
