Spelling? Grammar? 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-22 01:23:45pretty good. Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. Grammar? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. Spelling? Grammar? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Spelling? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too.
