Also, it would help if you learned to use quotation marks and wrote in first person (i.e. It would make your story much easier to read. The solid wall of text like you use is daunting and hard to read. This is the generally accepted way that most writers do it.Anonymous readerReport 2013-04-12 07:29:57That is so Hot and Erotic I would have loved to been there !!anonymous readerReport 2010-08-30 09:53:00yes i have heard of girls using a snake in their cunt. This is the generally accepted way that most writers do it.Anonymous readerReport 2013-04-12 07:29:57That is so Hot and Erotic I would have loved to been there !!anonymous readerReport 2010-08-30 09:53:00yes i have heard of girls using a snake in their cunt. 9andahalf/10
try to split up your paragraphs xxREADERReport 2007-06-19 13:23:08this is shite wher is the decent shite«12»
